Learning on internet and learning at schools
Education is always an controversial issue for dacades. Some peole believe that internet nowadays plays more important role than schools however others hold the opinion of being educated by teachers at schools is better. This essay will discuss both views .
On the one hand, it is no doubt to say that internet is a Mr.well-know and we could search and learn lots of things on it not except teaching our children. For example, there are a variety of educational programs for them on youtube with its interesting contents and sound such as english123 or funnymath and the like. Besides, learning on internet make them feel more flexible and more comfortable owing to the fact that they could start studying at anytime and anywhere ,moreover, they will not be able to be compare their knowledge to anyone. Therefore, this perhaps will be a considerable method of teaching.
On the other hand, going to school and being informed by teachers is also necessary . because teachers not only train their students knowledge but also educate them social behaves and soft skills. Furthermore, it is school where children make friends , play and share with each others .for instance, a child usually plays with his or her friends tents to be more outgoing, active and extrovert than a child often stays at home all day long with his or her laptop. Hence, the role of schools and teachers should not underestimated.
In conclusion, a coin always has two sides. internet helps parents educate their sons and daughters many ways of learning ,however ,school environment is good for them as well. Patents should balance them to make sure our children developing as well as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97849462366 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62854953775 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616487455197 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2128814185 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247143058244 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713841235117 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864737419294 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145968724198 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385561837398 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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