Shopping online is replacing shopping at the stores. Discuss both pros and cons.
In 2017, Amazon launched commercial drone shipping, a method that seems to go straight ahead from [[a science fiction novel. Does ambitious move mean that online shopping has accumulated enough technology to take over the traditional market? If then, how will it change our way of shopping, what characteristics will be lost and what are the new exciting features of the near future?
Firstly, shopaholic might prefer the old-schooled way, due to the satisfaction it brings. The pleasure of touching the new product right after purchasing feels victorious, which is not available in the other method. We feel anxious waiting for the whole week just to see the product. Some also worry that the data accumulated from their online traits will be use unhealthily by big companies without their consent, and might harm their right of freedom.
However, online shopping isn't just a new method, but it's actually changing the way we purchase. Consumers are more active than ever before. With a powerful search engine, they can find whatever they want, not having to depend on the seller offers. This increases the flow of products, and profit goes to both purchasers and the sellers.
Purchasers get a better deal, buying goods become more convenient because they only stay at home and click the mouse. For purchasers, their products can reach wider and more specific target audiences and reduce the overhead cost.
With the exponential rise of technology, it's going to change many aspects of our living, like how the Internet have changed our lives 5 decades ago. Shopping online isn't an exception, thereafter I believe in the future, it will be modified day by day as to suit our needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59944067767 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682142857143 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6025416519 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111786139686 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345997373268 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524773821308 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581938712884 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318055828403 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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