Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Choosing accommodation is one of the most vital decision in a person’s life. Some people would rather live in a house. Others argue that living in an apartment is more beneficial. Personally, i side with the notion that the advantages of living in an apartment in comparison with living in a house outweigh the disadvantages.
First of all, opt for an apartment as accommodation brings people a number of benefits. The sense of safety and comfort are the most worthies when living in an apartment. People just keep a key and a lock, they easily own an ideal apartment. Moreover, the majority of the apartment has the security system services which protect their apartment from robbery or fire.
Secondly, there are several reasons can be cited for the advantages of living in an apartment. Children find it easier to play or communicate with the next door apartment. Additionally, for low-income people living in big cities, an apartment is not as expensive as compared with a house. Hence, the best choice is living in an apartment.
On the other hand, houses are also beneficial in regard to some other aspects. Garden lovers are also interested in living in a house due to the fact that houses offer an open space which people can make use of it for different purposes. Therefore, people freely design for their own houses. Besides, living in a house brings owners a sense of privacy.
In conclusion, making their choices between a house or an apartment depends on an individual’s interest and demand. However, from my point of view, i must say that apartments tend to be better than houses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, first of all, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88864478154 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531135531136 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0303193556 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.552549600783 0.244688304435 226% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184920136934 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132756064901 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314754253773 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145571970964 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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