Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping, etc should be supported or not.
The important effect of Dangerous activities which was always debatable, but has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of dangerous activity has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent year. It can be said that such activities attract a national as well as international tourist which helps to flourish a country's economy. This essay will elaborated activity have various benefits nevertheless also some drawback.
At the outset,there are numerous reason for dangerous activities should be supported or not but the most conspicuous from the fact that precarious affair helps to generate employment opportunities for the people as well as lend to organizers to earn their livelihood. For instance, such activities flourish country's economy.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of dangerous activity,but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that by engaging in such activities, people are putting their precious lives in danger. Moreover, taking part in daring sports is a very affair and everybody cannot afford it.
From what we discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of dangerous sports such as sky diving, river rafting and s on have a myriad of benefits, nevertheless also putting their lives in danger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59134615385 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02647572078 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600961538462 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3246792951 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.222222222 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181110889155 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741440963586 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396149239014 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109441746737 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423128435256 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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