In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays fewer people buy newspaper, magazines and even less watch TV programs. In particular, public in young ages more often prefer The internet to periodic editions and TV-shows. this is a worrying trend, since it results in decreasing this segment of business in many countries.
The reader’s reduction we are witnessing today could be caused by a number of reasons. First of all, affordability of smartphones keep people today in a non-stop information flow, where we should sort news and make decision about many details. this means that we can receive all information immediately and absolutely free, while newspapers cost some money. In addition, the speed of exchanging information is too fast for newspapers, which could provide news only after print. The result is that readers use the internet more often, which leads to the closure of the magazines, newspapers and TV-programs – the biggest segment of business.
What is needed to improve the situation is definite action. Publishing houses could create their own web-sites to post news faster and TV-channels could suggest viewers online translations. Other measures could include sms and e-mail sending to announce audience about the beginning of the show. Moreover, web-sites could offer users a comment service, where users could discuss video and leave their opinion, which creation group of web-site than can use to make more interesting topics.
In conclusion, I believe that the effects of low population of printed editions and TV-programs are too serious to ignore. some measures have to be taken soon, otherwise huge area of business will be at great risk.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7799871227 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642307692308 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1972817872 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160264065428 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515769252085 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352308229748 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085668852798 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486178441483 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.