In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays in majority companies in demand workers with practical skills. Due to the fact, that great number of young people start their career earlier than in previous years, they spend less time for education. this trend lead to gradual refusal of traditional education. Nevertheless, it is unlikely that academic qualifications will ever become unnecessary.
In most cases, like certain manual jobs, it is less important to be high-educated person than to have ability to learn new information fast, to have self-management skills and to be ready for co-operating work. However, for career growth it is necessary to obtain a deeper knowledge in profession that in particular provides by academic education. although, in a current reality some universities are losing their positions, more popular are becoming short-training courses like MBA, which offer narrow and in-depth study of the subject. In other words, it is as important to be educated person as to have practical experience.
Obviously, modern society is faced with results of technological progress, when given in school knowledge dated faster than educational centers could make changes in teaching materials. Certainly, in this situation for low-skilled work in higher priority employees, who has basic practical experience instead of a diploma. Otherwise, for highly qualified specialists such as a doctor or a scientist it is a vital priority to be graduated by a special university and have ability to operate both theoretical knowledge and practical skills.
In conclusion, education is important in learning the theoretical side in most professions. Moreover, theory is significant basis for practical skills. that is why academic education will always be necessary, although it can be modernized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, as to, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in most cases, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59259259259 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16991170099 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6148395541 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104240222472 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361697312327 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330400827197 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062101047425 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241280514246 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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