Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter include:
- what you bought
- what problem is
- why you want a refund
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. Recently, I ordered shaving machine from your website. Payment was made via credit card and items were received yesterday dated 15th December 2018. Today, I operated machine to test but it seems like there is some sort of problem with it. As it is making weird noises, while operating.
Let me explain you in detail. Initially, it started making weird noises, in order to cater it I tried charging it. However, after charging it started normally but, after 15 minutes of operation, it again started making noises. Moreover, spare battery is also missing from the packing. Therefore, as per policy of your company process needs to be initiated accordingly.
So, it is to inform you that I want to lodge a complaint for return of items. Moreover, the items should be tested as per your return policy and once results are finalised, refund of money should be initiated. Looking forward to your response in this regard.
Yours Sincerely,
David
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... making weird noises, while operating. Let me explain you in detail. Initially,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess needs to be initiated accordingly. So, it is to inform you that I want to l...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to your response in this regard. Yours Sincerely, David
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e in this regard. Yours Sincerely, David
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96428571429 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44459582607 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684523809524 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6758852145 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5714285714 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175684149762 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559829115581 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584852832756 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108405294987 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337298101637 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.6 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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