Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
family: '.SF UI Text'; color: rgb(69, 69, 69);">family: '.SFUIText'; font-size: 16pt;">nowadays, technology is developing more and more so that there are a lot of modern method in some areas. One of them is convenience foods. this kind of food is becoming more widespread and it is believed that it can replace traditional foods in the future. although some people disagree with this idea, in fact, there are number of reasons why package foods become common.
family: '.SF UI Text'; color: rgb(69, 69, 69);">family: '.SFUIText'; font-size: 16pt;">The first reason is convenience foods become more and more prevalent in the world. Indeed, package foods are easy to use and prepare. they do not take too much time to cook. they obviously become common. However, some people still like traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. they think we should reserve our culture and traditional foods are healthier than convenience foods.
family: '.SF UI Text'; color: rgb(69, 69, 69);">family: '.SFUIText'; font-size: 16pt;">Another reason is people nowadays are too busy. they do not have time to prepare traditional meals for themselves. they go to work every day and work all the time. they want to have a shinning future so that they work harder and harder. But, these things can give them a bad health. they do not have enough nutrition because of using convenience foods.
family: '.SF UI Text'; color: rgb(69, 69, 69);">family: '.SFUIText'; font-size: 16pt;">The last reason that I think it effect quite a lots to this idea is women in present time go to work like men so they don not have time to prepare meals for their family. Furthermore, these days, girls are equal with boys so they usually focus on education and career, they do not think more about household chores like in the past. Consequently, when they get married, they can lack of knowledge about cooking or preparing foods. some of them ofter use a charwoman to help them. Nevertheless, not all families can afford a charwoman and these things can cause a bad effect to the feeling among members in family.
family: '.SF UI Text'; color: rgb(69, 69, 69);">family: '.SFUIText'; font-size: 16pt;">although many people like traditional food and traditional methods, the trend towards smaller, more people suggest that convenience foods are likely to continue to grow in popularity and may replace traditional methods of food production and preparation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, may, nevertheless, so, still, i think, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27551020408 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25588164805 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451530612245 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 77.4112661841 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68181818182 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23204683552 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902149689487 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115119298592 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185856754452 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126936774671 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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