Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Nowadays population has been increasing in all over the world so numbers of vehicles are rising and if causes traffic and pollution in countries. There are many ways which can help to stop and decrease traffic and pollution and the cost of petrol is just one of them.
one way that people can use for solve these problems is that the cost of petrol be increased but it is not the best way because some people would not care about that and they will use own car anyway. On the other hand, if the petrol's cost would rise, the ticket of public transport has to be grown and this suation would not be fare for all people in a society.
The goverment can be improved the public transport that people would encourage to use of these. Because when people use public transports such as bus and taxi, numbers of vehicles which ride by one person would decrease and it helps that pollution and traffic would control. On the other hand, if people choose subway and train for their long journey instead of their car, it can useful for felling pollution.
Overall, the petrol's cost is the one way has to be concentrate on it and it is not the main way to solve traffic and pollution problems. Goverment has to teach people that use public transport instead of their car during in daily journey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
... cost of petrol is just one of them. one way that people can use for solve these...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...c transport that people would encourage to use of these. Because when people use publ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, so, as to, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51709401709 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22670898137 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465811965812 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.2126422541 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.444444444 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147698578239 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078718264968 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686420126526 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114335553753 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440524329138 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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