The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
To enhance society is primary duty of the citizens. The well-being of the society depends on various factors and the people share their manpower as well as mental power to develop the society. I agree with the statement that the well-being of a society enhance when many of its people question authority. The members of society have right to ask about the authorities work. There are different examples which clarify that the statement is somehow make strong point of view.
Firstly, Due to questioning the authorities get feared that the public is aware about their work. The authority works under pressure of public which led them towards welfare of society. For example in democratic countries the government elected by the public and the citizens always build their pressures on mislead decisions of the government. In India the citizens raise their voice against authority to save the society from detrimental act and asked questions from authorities to prevent society.
Secondly, as I saw in India the government officers easily took bribes and convert illegal thing to legal. But now it is not possible easily because Indian citizen get right to information act. It makes people powerful to ask question about any action had been taken by authority person or government. She now the officers’ work for well-being of society and everyone get fair chance of opportunity. Everyone is not perfect may be the authority mistakenly took false decision for society so people can help with questions to prevent the society from harm.
Thirdly, the questioning is powerful tool to win battles. As a counselor to gather information I do questioning and as well as parents use questioning to their child for well-being. With the questions we can trap the feign face of authority as media is doing for society. In interview sessions the interviewer asks questions to find the curst information from the interviewees as well as when many people ask question then the awareness about truth spew out. It is the important tool to enhance development of society in positive direction.
Finally, it is good to ask questions and on the basis of above examples I can say that the well-being of society is enhanced when people question to authority about decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: made
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10483870968 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77750880303 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486559139785 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5436745671 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.95 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44843437484 0.243740707755 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144350395055 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179830736583 0.0758088955206 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297393557309 0.150359130593 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166081343924 0.0667264976115 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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