Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say
– why you thought about him/her
– describe the furniture
– suggest a way for him/her to get it
Dear Mathew,
Hope you are doing well. It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing this letter in reference to inform you that I will be relocating back to my hometown Delhi due to a transfer order from my existing firm.
Since I will be permanently moving to Delhi and I have some furniture which I would like to give to you. I remember the last time we met at your place you told me you needed a dining table and some chairs. The furniture I have is a dining table and chairs which I recently bought from IKEA. It has a modular design and is made of teak moreover the chairs have a fancy leather cushion which provides comfort while sitting.
I suggest you come over to my place to have a look at the furniture next weekend and it will also be a great opportunity to meet you after a long time. For transportation, you will need to arrange a local shipper to ship the item to your place. If you have any trouble finding a shipper I know a person who will be able to help in the shipping process.
I look forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Warm Wishes
Brian
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mathew, Hope you are doing well. It has been a l...
^^^
Line 6, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...shipper to ship the item to your place. If you have any trouble finding a shipper ...
^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponse and seeing you soon. Warm Wishes Brian
^^^
Line 10, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d seeing you soon. Warm Wishes Brian
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20379146919 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30853854079 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568720379147 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7608934557 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9166666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171375544922 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066787349001 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477254774523 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112673591151 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00975252815619 0.0580467560999 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.