Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in a rural area. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside.
While some people agree that living in cities has tremendous job opportunities, others argue that living in villages provide a piece of mind and a healthy lifestyle. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such approaches.
On the one hand, there are many advantages of living in a city that is, such as enormous work opportunities for skilled as well as the non-skilled workforce in urban areas. This is to satisfy the demands and requirements of the increasing population in cities. Conversely, because of the high migration rate problems, traffic congestion and crime are at its peak. Besides, the financial gap between poor and rich is prominent. Therefore, lacking a sense of living in a community. To illustrate, the greatest most significant negative impact is prevalent on the amplifying rates of the housing. Thus, people moving to cities have to live in low budgeted houses or homeless.
On the other hand, urban life offers the chance to live in the clean, green, and less populated areas. Furthermore, the food is very less like to be adulterated. Consequently, people are healthier and have a very high life expectancy as compared to city people. In a survey, conducted by a leading newspaper has concluded that the figure for cancer patients is gaining numbers in cities, whereas, the statistics have reduced drastically in villages because of less processed food. Despite many positive sides, the main negative point is that with the increase in the agrarian technology requirement of workers are decreasing, resulting in the unemployment of people.
In conclusion, both large towns and urban areas have some conveniences and drawbacks for its citizens. The living location should ultimately be chosen depending on an individual's base on their professional job. For example, farmer ideally will choose the rural area and on the other hand, IT professionals will prefer to be close to the city center.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, conversely, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21518987342 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93788169509 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5941931591 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9411764706 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326198548438 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909054783531 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104865311031 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199209904519 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598334456466 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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