A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercises and avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Health- conscious persons are generally associated with strict eating habits, rigorous workouts and are known to keep their minds stress-free. In this essay, I would like to discuss measures that India must adapt to maintain and promote good health.
Firstly, in India regional crop is the staple food of a particular state. A nutritious-balanced diet plays an important role in boosting our metabolism and cleansing our system. The human body mainly consists of water and liquid intake is equally vital to regularize functioning of our internal organs. For instance, only organic vegetables, crops free of pesticides should be consumed. Unhygienic street food and poor cooking conditions should be avoided.
Secondly, illness and terminal diseases are becoming extremely common in India. A routine that includes physical activity such as yoga, jogging or other types of physical training is not only beneficial for maintaining a good physique but also our mental health. Indian masses should be educated about the impacts of deteriorating health and regularize medical check-ups.
Lastly, competitive, fast-paced lives have pressurized the workforce of India to a large extent. A recent study indicates an exponential growth of 40% in cardiac attacks amongst individuals below the age of 35 years. People are losing health due to long working hours and time-consuming daily commute. Engaging in activities that release tension and frustrations is necessary.
In conclusion, the Indian government must set up health camps and provide free medical aid to those who are suffering from bad health. Furthermore, awareness campaigns towards a healthy lifestyle should be carried out at schools, universities, fitness centers and supermarkets. Hence, a healthy mind and body are essential for personal and national well-being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cooking conditions should be avoided. Secondly, illness and terminal diseases ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64855072464 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02231035855 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.699275362319 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.251654992 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7058823529 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106025553024 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287963371235 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306423995654 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535174800658 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360396347105 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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