In ny countries today, insufficient respects is shown to older people.
What do you think nay be the reasons for this?
What problem might this cause in society?
Raising concern about disrespectful of elderly in different nations. This essay will explain why people are less respect to aged people and the effect it caused.
There are several reasons to explain why old people are not as respected as the past. Firstly, people do not know how to get along with old people. People were used to live in a big family but now most of the families are a nuclear family. In the past, children lived with their grandparents or relatives where they learned how to get on well with older people. A strong bonding was built in this relationship mode. However, in a nuclear family, no such bonding was formed, it is difficult for young people to understand what older people think and vice versa. In addition, young people see the traditional values as an outdated one. They are not willing to listen to the advice given by older people. As a result, older people may seem less valued by the others.
The society was facing various challenges caused the disrespectful culture to the elderly. The most obvious problem probably is the conflict between the younger one and older one. clips on youtube and other social media showing flight between young and old due to different values are the best illustrations of this problem. Secondly, the older one may withdraw themselves from the community due to low self-esteem. Being ignored by the young leads the elderly to question their own value. Gradually, they are isolated from the society that they cannot get help even they are in need.
In sum, there are different reasons that lead to people less respect to the elderly and society consequently, is not as harmonious as the one where the older one treated by courtesy and respect.
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- In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not built new homes there.What is your opinions about this? 73
- New stories on TV and in newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.What is your opinions about this ? 61
- Some people argued that formal education should start as early as possible, while others thinks that it should be start until 7 year of age.Discuss both views and give your opinions. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as for, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83728813559 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49073895116 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0230964358 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2777777778 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190642970205 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555729292294 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358177954503 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109947496063 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258899802049 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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