You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter:
– Explain where your apartment is
– Describe the room
– What kind of person would you like to rent it to
Dear Mr. Hassan,
My name is Omoshola Owolabi, a Mathematics major in the University of Lagos. I want to rent out a spare room in my apartment and I need your help regarding this.
As per the university policy, notification of apartments for rent to students must be sent to the director of accommodation in the institution. My apartment is on the 7th floor of the Ark Towers in 15 Brookes street, centennial avenue, Lagos.
I rented this apartment because of its awesome features, which makes studying very conducive and enjoyable. the apartment has a lift, WIFI connection, water heating facilities, and electric cooking gas. Also, it has
a balcony overlooking the Lagos city's skyline, alongside an exquisite toilet and bathroom solely for the room.
I am concerned about who will rent the room as it has a lengthy tenancy agreement, which suitable person must be willing to abide by. I like to sublet the room to a co-student, who majors in Engineering. The occupant must be very serious with studies and must be willing to pay 2 months’ advance payment.
I am really looking forward to getting help to rent out this room to a suitable student from our university.
Yours faithfully,
Omoshola Owolabi
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-14 | sohailahmad | 78 | view |
| 2020-01-09 | Richa.mahajan | 87 | view |
| 2019-11-26 | feroz121 | 89 | view |
| 2019-11-25 | feroz121 | 89 | view |
| 2019-09-24 | chintan.panchal3 | 89 | view |
- You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter:– Explain where your apartment is– Describe the room– What kind of 73
- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views. 73
- Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion 56
- Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that a good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to regard' or 'regard'.
Suggestion: to regard; regard
...om in my apartment and I need your help regarding this. As per the university policy, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... studying very conducive and enjoyable. the apartment has a lift, WIFI connection, ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00487804878 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93460755048 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619512195122 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6113905642 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221405537141 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839915764765 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755960306256 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101567331818 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521849040597 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.