Young single people often leave their parents to live alone for study or work. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In this era, most people tend to work and study away from their parents which is a very good way to train them. Although there are a few drawbacks to this approach, they are still embracing it and continuing this practice.
To start with being away with your family gives you a life lesson which is particular, being an independent person. You are in-charge of everything from your dishes and to your laundry. I think this is the most important lesson when young people who are living far away from their loved ones.
Another is time management which is also a key factor not just in school but also for their work. Being able to manage your time in different aspect of your daily routine. Like going to the grocery, cleaning your room, and washing your clothes. Plus when they are away with their parents. They are the one who is in-charge in taking care of their health, they carefully check and take care of themselves.
However being faraway for quite sometime young adults tend to forget their family in the sense that they do not call them anymore or even visit them once a week. Which is a very sad part for the family this is the main reason why most of the parents nowadays are overprotective to their children.
In conclusion, I strongly concur that in order for a person to grow independently and manage time accurately they need to be away to their parents. For them to grow not just by their skills and action, but also in their capacity to decide what is right from what is wrong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, i think, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54044117647 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2831770372 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518382352941 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2698100475 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2142857143 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225851703342 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810468015097 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730319898926 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136395876645 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508201368265 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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