The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Non- profit organization are raising awareness that smoking could have detrimental effect on one’s body. However, people's already realized “What damage it does”, but still many of them continue to smoke. In my opinion, Educating people about the health benefits of reducing the smoking, can have some positive results.
Firstly, Most of the people are known about smoking and “What it does to their internal organs”. People who are smoking on a daily basis suffers from many health issues such as: Lung cancer, Damage to internal organs and Neurological problems. Regular smoking can also reduce one’s life span, mostly suffering from lung cancer. Meanwhile, some people are having imaginary thoughts that it can reduce stress. Air exhaled after smoking can be inhaled by non-smokers which would also cause some health issues.
Secondly, Government should needs to impose some regulations on smoking, and raise more awareness For example: Camping, and Educating people about damage it does to organs. Moreover, reducing smoke can have health benefits. Advertising is also another form of communication to Peoples Like: Having an image. Movies plays major role by displaying positive effects, “Which can trigger” people and diverting them on a path of reduction. If Government wouldn't impose any rules, it could have some catastrophic effects on people’s life. Finally, raising awareness is the crucial part in reduction of smoke.
In conclusion, although many of the people are aware about effects. Some people are still habituated like addicted. Smoking can be reduced with the help of Government as well as people.
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"Smoking is injurious to…
"Smoking is injurious to health", We can see this on the back of the cigarette packet as well as on the wall posters, and in movies. Even though people have awareness of smoking and its effects, they are not able to stop that habit of smoking regardless of age. There are several reasons for this, This essay will shed some light on the issues and suggest solutions to those.
To commence with, Cigarettes are made with tobacco which consists of a drug named nicotine. If once a person started smoking, then he can't give up that habit due to the drug present in that product. Consequently, it is detrimental to health and they will suffer from lung diseases. To counter that problem, The government has to take serious actions with stringent rules and regulations accordingly to ban companies that are making smoking products and also there are numerous products that came into the market which will help to stop that habit by swallowing those.
Even if the government bans smoking products, Addicted people will try to find an alternative to those. Provided that, they will start taking local-made drug items secretively. The solution to tackle this issue is that the government and NGOs need to take care of the addicted people by establishing rehabilitation centers to rejuvenate them.
And there is one more reason to addict to smoking is that, although movies or web series or any kind of programs are displaying the title like "Don't smoke" at particular scenes, the content they show and the attitude of their favorite actors will attract people to do like that. While this impact is not only on the adults but also on the teenage guys. So, The government has to restrict the usage of harmful content in TV shows or in movies. The films and other programs that telecast should stop using such type of content by restricting themselves to strict rules that the government had provided.
In conclusion, There are a plethora of problems that will cause a person to smoke but all these can be solved by the appropriate actions of the government and the active participation of people to save their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56299212598 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77023552219 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4545996442 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1176470588 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20968580238 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835643468645 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458388472773 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153914796709 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313460206792 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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