Scientific research are carried and controlled by governments rather than private companies.
Do you agree or disagree
Give an example from your knowledge
In contemporary society, there is a controversial argument that whether scientific experiments should be monitored as well as conducting by the intelligence government nor by private enterprises. From my personal perspective, I believe the authorities should run these research rather than private institutions.
it is an undeniable fact that the intelligence agencies should hold scientific research for various reasons. First and foremost, experiment">experimentation controlled by the governmental agencies is beneficial for not only the government but also the public. To illustrate, the fundamental purpose of scientific research run by the government is always towards their citizens. Otherwise, if a personal company conducts its own experiment, its aim, perhaps, is to discover a deleterious weapon or an invention that would bring a tremendous amount of profit for them, not for the general public. In addition, whereas the research carried out by the governmental agencies would obtain a variety amount of investment, the experiment conducted by its counterpart comes from their own corporations' financial budget that would restrain the process as well as expenditure for the research.
On the other hand, while I agree that the government should mainly manage scientific research, I am convinced that private enterprises could conduct their own research before asking for the authorities' permission. As I mentioned before, several companies carry out the experiment for the sake of their own benefits, thus, when reporting these personal experimentations to the government would ensure the process as well as the principal goal. Furthermore, allowing several companies to run their research would lighten the burden for the government that they could share the accountability for the enterprises. To demonstrate, authorities need to administrate an enormous amount of work, hence, authorizing the research for the company would be advantageous for the intelligence agencies to reduce their amount commission.
In conclusion, I am in favour of carrying scientific managed by the authorities for these mentioned reasons. However, it would be beneficial that the personal companies could hold their own experiment under the government's administration.
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...uld hold their own experiment under the governments administration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86144578313 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61157013161 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487951807229 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5829806363 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.692307692 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190762683947 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086760053518 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479393893278 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134432312616 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416357395954 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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