Write about Climate change? who is responsible whether Government or industries?why
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Climate change is formidable truth which has severe consequences on our life. Both government and Industries have the infamous role in such disaster to occur. Though I have more inclination towards blaming Government for their lack in responsibilities which caused inevitable suffering to human life and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
Climate changes are majorly happening because of Government leniency towards it. We know how the developed countries are performing the nuclear tests in order to dominate the developing countries with their uncontrollable power. With such test they are not only threatening the other nations but also generating the threat for themselves. For an instance, the meteorological department in India has recorded the coldest winters in December since more than 30 years.Overall this will put the existence of entire mankind on stake.Therefore I believe that each nation Government such take concrete actions to control such horrible climate changes.
However, industries are also one of the important players in destroying the environment. Industries waste disposal inspire water and air pollution and both are definitely sufficient for dangerous climate changes. For an instance, in India and China, air quality is recorded as dangerous and unhealthy for human life. Also, it cultivates the emergence of diseases such as Lung and Skin cancer etc.
The conclusion is, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that Government must consider such climate changes as threat to mankind and must take substantial actions to improve it. </span><br>
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| 2019-01-26 | ashishhans88 | 77 | view |
| 2019-01-26 | ashishhans88 | 77 | view |
| 2019-01-26 | ashishhans88 | 77 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73895582329 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34927238698 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610441767068 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0603680146 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167882894236 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645973276898 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564433507472 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102406929741 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030255421384 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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