Lifestyle affects health, how should health/medical department responds?
The important effect of lifestyle affects health which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of lifestyle affect people health has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on people daily living style affects their health in recent year. It can be agreed that people daily lifestyel affects their health it may cause many problems to people in our society.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why people lifestyle is affecting their health but the most conspicious one steam's from the fact that people should change their living style and they should do phycial activity everyday to be healthy. As an illustration, health/ medical department should counsell the people about the healthy life for example conducting health education in public place, community and in school etc. In addition, a current research shows that in America ten people died in 2017 due to not maintaining their life styel properly due to fever, obesity and diarrhoea. Thus, people should be aware about their lifestyle by eating healthy food, doing daily physical exercise, drinking pure water etc.
Another key of justification for upholding this notion is that peolpe should implement their daily activities such as proper sanitation, proper waste disposal etc. For instance people should be careful for their good health by visiting to the doctor for regular whole body checkup in every 6 months.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of peoples daily lifestyle is dangerous for their health is prominent and people should not negelated the problems related to health. They should be alert in their daily negative lifestyle leading problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...yle and they should do phycial activity everyday to be healthy. As an illustration, heal...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'current research'.
Suggestion: current research
...mmunity and in school etc. In addition, a current research shows that in America ten people died i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30545454545 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49883543124 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.38448729 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.636363636 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318462242857 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147278592684 0.0925447433944 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893719239738 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214095310692 0.151781067708 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731677683178 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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