It's better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.
What extent do you agree or disagree.
In this era of globalization more families are moving to metropolitan cities from the countryside in search of better jobs and education thus there is a raging debate where some say that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside and not in a big city. I agree with the later view and will elucidate my opinion with relevant examples.
Firstly there are a plethora of disadvantages associated with the growth of children in remote places the most preponderant being the lack of quality education and exposure as compared to cities. It is evident that the countryside areas have lack of infrastructure, poor quality of education and amenities like internet which make is a situation worse. In a recent survey done by Economic times around 80% of parents wanted their children to grow in cities due to lack of facilities and opportunities in the countryside.
On the other hand metropolitan cities in India like Delhi, Mumbai provides a better quality of education and amenities to children which acts as a vital factor at an adolescent age and thus prepares them for the future challenges. children in cities also get better sporting facilities and thus it can help in making a strong foundation for future endeavour. In a recent survey done by the government of India, there is a huge migration pattern especially for middle-class families living in remote villages to cities in search of better future and growth for their children.
Thus, in my opinion, considering both sides of this contentious argument, it is evident that cities offer better growth opportunities for children as compared to the countryside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...repares them for the future challenges. children in cities also get better sporting faci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, thus, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05166051661 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97590895281 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505535055351 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2836518131 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.111111111 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224212197094 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935781435597 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756979331207 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142383707242 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763797353137 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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