Do you agree or disagree？ It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than
doing physical exercise. Explain your answer with examples and specific reasons.
In the modern era, stress has played a prominent role in all societies. Because it is of paramount importance, researchers have always searched ways for reducing anxiety among human. A controversial question which is often raised this idea is whether individual prefer to do some exercise or reading book and watching a film for reducing their stress. I contend that the best ways for reducing the stress are doing regular sports. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first factor to be mentioned is that doing sports help people to reduce their stress. To elaborate on my point, when people start to do sports especially aerobics sports, their body starts to emit adrenaline. Adrenalin is a hormone in human's body that has a duty to makes happiness sense. In this situation, people feel happy and this hormone remains in the body for several days. Also, individuals go to the gym for doing some sports. In this situation, they connect with other sportsman and improving their social skills so that social connection assist human to deduce their stress. In contrast, when people try to see a film or reading a book, they would reduce stress for some hours. And, after finishing the film, they may come back to the previous situations.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that a person tries to do sports in green places that have fresh air. To shed more light on this matter, people tend to do some sports such as running, playing basketball, driving a bicycle, and many other similar sports in the parks and jungles. Hence, these places have a lot of trees and flowers that produce a lot of oxygen and reduce carbon dioxide; therefore, parks have much fresh air. When sportsman smells fresh air, it helps them to reduce their anxiety and increasing happiness. Conversely, people study books or watching a movie in their home that cannot help them to increase oxygen their body. As we know, most doctors say to the sick people that go out home and go to the parks. Also, they suggest them to do some aerobic sports in the park to smell the fresh air. This strategy helps them to reduce their stress.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that doing regular sports help people to reduce their stress and anxiety. I believe that doing sports not only help people to release some happiness hormones in their body but also help human to increase the oxygen level in their body.
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- TPO23 80
- TOEFL TPO 34 - Integrated Writing Task 60
- TPO 47 80
- Imagine that you are planning to take a vacation and are trying to decide between two places to visit Which of these two options do you believe would give you better information about making your choice Why Reading about the places online Discussing them 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, hence, may, so, therefore, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82009345794 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39655741064 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495327102804 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6646849734 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6956521739 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6086956522 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34782608696 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0760728240568 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264458316522 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289159259055 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537671222693 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185083207225 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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