People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
After the industrial revolution, metropolises have risen, and they brought to people its problems such as high crime rates and pollution. In order to solve those problems some people suggest that government should support people to move to regional towns and I think this must be done in order to remain peaceful and healthy environment in a country.
First of all, one of the biggest problem that people have to challenge in the big cities is high crime rates that are caused by huge population and unemployment. Metropolises are overload by people, so it became very hard to find a good job. Therefore, people think that instead of spending a lot of time with searching for a job it is better to steal valuable item from someone and sell it. Another problem that people have to face it in big cities is pollution. It is clear that more people bring more problem since we have cars, buildings and establishments that release toxic gas to the air and pollute waters whatever cleaning system we have does not matter to the problem because every step we take release poison to everywhere.
When it comes to the solution, in my opinion, as many people suggest, government should support people to move to regional areas because it is obvious that too many people move to big cities in order to find a job or get a good education since lack of these needs. However, with a good plan conducted by a government, good education and new working areas can be provided with opening new schools and universities for further education and starting new business that can be beneficial for both state and people who are unemployed.
When all things are considered, people are in big cities suffering from too many things such as high crime rates and pollution. In order to solve those problems government is expected to help people to go regional areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
... and pollution. In order to solve those problems government is expected to help people t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, therefore, as to, i think, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.803125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59294226881 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496875 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9128260149 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.727272727 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0909090909 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401856731633 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170206102519 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114351972841 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256550303467 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499960471791 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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