write a letter to your friend who is thinking of learning to drive and asking for advice
Dear Mike,
How have you been? It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing in reference to your letter asking for a piece of advice about learning to drive.
I would like to tell you that it is a great initiative from your side to start learning driving, in fact, my wife also learnt it recently so I can share some useful tips which she encountered in the process to be an expert driver. Firstly for amateurs, it is highly recommended to join a driving institute so that they can gain theoretical and practical knowledge on vehicles apart from this the instructors will also impart knowledge on driving rules and regulations.
Additionally, at the end of the course, there will be a theoretical test on driving rules followed by a practical test which will include a 200 kilometre of drive in a real-time scenario. Apart from this, you can start a parallel process for application of driving license as you will need it while you start driving in a real-time scenario.
I look forward to your reply and further clarifications.
Warm Wishes
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...iative from your side to start learning driving, in fact, my wife also learnt it recent...
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Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended joining'.
Suggestion: recommended joining
...ver. Firstly for amateurs, it is highly recommended to join a driving institute so that they can ga...
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and further clarifications. Warm Wishes Ben
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, while, apart from, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70212765957 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7649752757 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1945899514 44.8134815571 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2222222222 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232884807079 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100114220372 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158522694275 0.0603063233224 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14935397775 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106575189917 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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