Nowadays,there is a rapid increase of rubbish amounts all around the world.what are the main cause for it? What can be solution,in your opinion ?
The proliferation in the amount of garbage all around the world is not hard to notice. Land mass and water bodies are losing their aesthetic values as well. Mentioning some principal reasons seeding this global offensive move, I would like to propose a solution in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the first and foremost thing that can be highlighted in this context as a cause is the over-usage of material by the people of various nations. Undoubtedly, the acceleration in the population is acting as a fuel to this. This is because, the more the consumption of material the more the rise in the amount of left-over material. Another major catalysing reason is the usage of such material, which never decomposes and stays as such forever, by the manufacturers to safeguard their produce and prolong their life. Plastic is the perfect epitome of this. It is notoriously known thoughout the globe that this polymer is extremely hostile to the environment, still it is the first preference of the packaging industry. When the people get the products ranging from grains to cosmetics, they keep the userful things and throw the plastic packaging which adds to the garbage and stays unharmed. And when millions of people do this, the growth of garbage which would be added to the land or water is bound to happen.
However, I think reciprocating this situation is not an uphill task for that race which knows no limits. If people understand the fatal consequences of exacerbating garbage issue and start using things at optimum level then it can be a beginning fo a clean tomorrow. Products cannot be stopped from getting manufactured or usd, however, the packaging material which is dumped should be biodegradable such as paper. Properly managed dumping sites, separate space for biodegradable, non-biodegradable and recycolable waste can further help in bettering the situation. Authorities need to learn the waste management schemes which can reduce the amount. There are some techniques which can turn waste into useful material like fuel. Adopting such measure can reduce the level of damage caused by waste material spillage.
To conclude, there are significant reasons behind the increase in the amount of garbage worldwide however, with some wise steps, this problem can be solved to a great extent.
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Comments
Only five bands?
Only five bands?
I expected more :((
Can anybody please shed some light?
Task I is chosen, so you get
Task I is chosen, so you get the score according to task I. It should be IELTS essays for task II in the category.
Fixed. The correct score is: 8.0 Out of 9
Thank you so much Sir/Ma'am.
Thank you so much Sir/Ma'am.
Will I receive the same score in IELTS exam also?
Your essays are excellent.
Your essays are excellent. You deserve 8.0 or over in IELTS exam.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, then, well, i think, such as, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08376963351 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77099403435 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544502617801 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8975137932 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.210526316 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126716136229 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420852339827 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466074590747 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855456564029 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269336314778 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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