University students are increasingly studying abroad a part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweight the disadvantages?
Nowadays many students chooses do part of their studies abroad. This choice brings lots of positive impact for a student including opportunity to live abroad and experience foreign culture. Despite that this opportunity can bring some difficulties into student life including time adapting to new country. In my opinion, this challenge helps students to develop adaptability skills to new environment and it can give better understanding and acceptance diversity of this planet.
Studying abroad is an excellent opportunity for students to experience life in different culture than they grow up. Moving to other country students has to deal with different language and possibly social norms accepted in that culture. In this way young people widen their perspective facing things what is not usual to country they grow up. Also, this benefit them because they can understand better own culture. Studying abroad for a short while helps young people to understand both cultures - their and foreign.
Doing exchange during study period can be difficult timing for student understanding and adapting to new culture. This can cause social anxiety if students can not adapt to new environment easily. In addition, language barrier can cause feeling of being excluded. Moreover, leaving best friends, family and comfort zone can be challenge possibly causing depression. Moving abroad for person can be hard adapting to totally unknown environment.
In today´s society more and more students goes on exchange. It has some positive impact like understanding different culture and your own as well. But it can bring some difficulties that student could be facing including anxiety and feeling outsider. In my opinion, in a long run is good to get to know new cultures and religions, it helps to understand better each other and brings more tolerance into this world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to do'
Suggestion: to do
Nowadays many students chooses do part of their studies abroad. This choi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38566552901 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74831615809 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522184300341 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2269195696 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188916689438 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789149810639 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11392713544 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125110734152 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689502197342 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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