More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages?
People’s choice of food has vastly changed in recent years. While some choose to have their meals freshly cooked, the majority has now switched to eating ready-made food. In my opinion, I believe this development brings huge advantages to the consumers.
Firstly, it is no doubt that pre-made food is more convenient for people. Since this type of food is already cooked and contained in cans or boxes, people can easily open up the products and start eating right away. Not only this allows consumers to have their breakfasts, lunches or dinners anywhere at any time they want, it also removes the time-wasting process of cooking the meals.
The second merit of changing into pre-made food is that it is much cheaper than the newly cooked dishes. For years, scientists and large enterprises have been working together and they have come up with many effective methods that help reduce the cost of mass producing canned food while retaining the same ingredients as freshly cooked meals have to offer. This means that the price of the final products would be much more affordable and favorable to consumers compared to the cost of preparing freshly made meals. For example, while individuals have to pay 2 dollars for a dish of 3 pieces of fish, a can of 3 pre-made fishes only costs half a dollar.
However, there is one minor setback along with the aforementioned advantages. All ready-made food may not be able to satisfy every customer because each person has his or her own appetize, which barely happens with freshly prepared food as it can be adjusted according to people’s tastes.
In conclusion, while there is indeed a drawback, I believe that opting for pre-cooked food is definitely more advantageous to people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, may, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99656357388 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66581185151 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3592041601 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375213465157 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132179511523 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843485408017 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22039111564 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598443225246 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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