The Widespread Use of the Internet Has Brought Many Problems. What Do You Think Are the Main Problems Associated with the Use of the Web? What Solutions Can You Suggest?
The develop of the internet in this modern era has brought many beneficiaries to support human life. However, at the same time, it also brings negative effects when using the internet connection. In this essay, I would like to share several issues related to the bad effects and solution to tackle them.
While surfing in the internet, people easy to access a wide range kind of the website, including an adult content which should be avoided to youth people. So it is the first problem which has no restriction in age. Imagine that when the young access an adult content? Which display criminal offences or sexual harassments?. Young people have a good memorize that can be used by them to copy it in their daily life. This content will trigger and inspire them to commit juvenile delinquencies, such as murdering, burglaring, and drinking alcohol.
Another reason in the internet connection is hoax contents. Because on the internet every people can be a creator and share the information, make the internet susceptible dominated by untrue information. If this phenomenon did not handle accurately, it will have a potential to treat social life and national security. For example miss information about traditional drugs that can cure various kinds of diseases. Applying this content without proper research has potential to miss in use.
Base on the problems above, in my perspective, there are two ways to handle them, namely, family approach and governmental approach. In the earlier one, parents have to be active in take care of their children. For instance parents should be assisting their children while using the internet and make a restriction just to youth friendly only. For the last one, the governments have to create a regulation that can that can punish the one who creates and spread the inappropriate content.
To sum up, it is a must in creating a synergy action between family and government to create the internet world save for everyone.
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| 2019-08-27 | mary.ssherr | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0736196319 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73019231781 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1877284302 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0526315789 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132290523632 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394848929325 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330726893009 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719831464756 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032222036975 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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