The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The assertion given states that cooperation is more important for the young pepole for getting success in the various area like government, industry, or other field. competition is not given much importance in assertion on which i totally disagree.both the aspects are necessary for one to have growth in their field and if any one is not present then it may hamper the growth of the individual.
cooperation between the people is the important aspects for the growth of individual.if there is absence of cooperaton between the people they might get less success.As from the history it can be clearly inferred that cooperation makes one succeed for eg. all the people united in India to get the freedom and hence without any violence they succeed in achieving the freedom.people get benefits like what is going nin the market and what is the best thing to be done with the cooperation of one another. if there is no cooperation between the political parties then they will always contradict each other and may the development of the country may get thwart.Same can be accounted with the insdustry as well as other field of the society.cooperation makes the growth very fast.
As well as with the cooperation the existence of competition in the society should be there between two or many groups or people. without competition one growth in that field would be there.competition forces to make better things or to be better in the society than other.if competition is not thereone doesn't looks to make better and follows it's regular things in that field, which doen't anymore increase the quality in that field.for example in the field of arts if there is competition then only the artist try to do better in their respective field and try to find new things in their arts.Same ways let's takes example of mobile industry, various companies are competing with each other and so to try to improve their quality to get prime existence in the market.competition should be healthy not the one like that take one in depression or give negative effect.In search of improvement various new technologies are developed.Hence competition is also necessary .
both competition and cooperation together can bring substential growth in the various field.For example various smartphones company have competition between them but also have cooperation and deals between them which make them success, like one company having good quality of camera lenses and is best in that field exchanges it camera lenses with the display of other company who is best at that. so though having competition between them for success in market they cooperate with each other and exchange their various product.
so best way for the society to prepare its young people for government, industry, or other is by instilling in them the sense of cooperation with the attitude of healthy competion. having both cooperation and competiton attitude gives the best success to one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, still, then, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 55.5748502994 130% => OK
Nominalization: 34.0 16.3942115768 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2478.0 2260.96107784 110% => OK
No of words: 485.0 441.139720559 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10927835052 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9149371419 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.410309278351 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 767.7 705.55239521 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.8473053892 193% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.373025522 57.8364921388 345% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.272727273 119.503703932 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.0909090909 23.324526521 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.70786347227 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.25449101796 514% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284452301348 0.218282227539 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150662231706 0.0743258471296 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166282269392 0.0701772020484 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214656936942 0.128457276422 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138488434337 0.0628817314937 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 14.3799401198 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 48.3550499002 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.197005988 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 98.500998004 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 12.3882235529 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.1389221557 176% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.9071856287 168% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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