Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
As improved technology, people have different methods to receive important news. While some readers would use the internet to browse the news, the others still consider that they can obtain the most crucial news from the newspaper. I, personally, agree with the point that reading the newspapers is the best way to get essential information.
There are several reasons that why reading news on the internet is not recommended. Firstly, thanks to the popularity of social media, it is commonplace to read news from various fans pages and clubs. However, we cannot ensure whether the source of news is under scrutiny by professionals and then whether the information is factual or just made up by the editors in order to have more people to click the news and then they can earn more money. Hence, it causes that there are too many trivial news on the internet that the readers cannot recognize its correct.
On the other hand, it is said that newspapers can provide a crucial source of news for several reasons. For the first reason, news will be seriously scrutinized by a panel of experts before published. Therefore, the readers can obtain the correct and true information through reading newspaper. Also, the editors would clearly classify the categories of news, which makes the readers more convenient to get the corresponding types of information. Moreover, the most important news will usually be highlighted and be put on the first page, so people would never lose this big news and they can easily catch them. Hence, from the above reasons, newspapers still play an important role in providing news.
In conclusion, while it is popular for people to read news on the internet, reading news from the newspapers is more convincing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much trivial news', 'a good deal of trivial news'.
Suggestion: much trivial news; a good deal of trivial news
...ey. Hence, it causes that there are too many trivial news on the internet that the readers cannot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01374570447 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63576795371 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522336769759 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0781585692 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43543616554 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156684754755 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813891934158 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311644437224 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518852935996 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.