Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does advantage outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, a majority of enterprises have been encouraged to relocate their offices to the countryside due to the increasing number of vehicles and rising demand for housing in the city. I believe that this has more benefits than drawbacks.
The disadvantage of companies moving to rural areas is that this movement will undoubtedly have a negative impact on employees’ lives. This is because staff members are torn between whether to acquire a house in close proximity to their company or spend more time on their daily commute to work. If the workers find that it is not worth doing the things mentioned above, there is strong likelihood that they will leave their company to a firm that is based within municipal areas.
Despite this, there are certainly indisputable advantages this shift can bring to people’ lives. First, it is obvious that with the offices of companies transferred to rural areas, there will be fewer vehicles travelling in the center of the city, which helps reduce the traffic density, especially during rush hour. Another point is that it is probable that there will be an increasing number of people choosing to commute to work by public transportation. This will lead to the decrease in exhaust emission emitted into the environment, which plays an important role in combating environmental issues such as global warming. Finally, if businesses decide to relocate to far-flung areas, this will help create more job opportunities and give a boost to the economy of these deprived areas. For example, countryside dwellers can opt to work in factories to earn a higher salary, thereby tremendously improving their living standard.
I would therefore argue that although there are still disadvantages of businesses moving to the countryside, they are outweighed by the advantages. It can not only enrich people’ lives but improve the worsening condition of our environment as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...n between whether to acquire a house in close proximity to their company or spend more time on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, still, therefore, well, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22903225806 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92515197005 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1583377731 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.692307692 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130854038006 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446188181181 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477970182567 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767692611316 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229863777078 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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