Currently, in some countries increasing population especially of young generation is more than old people. This scenario has put some merits and demerits issues. In this regards following essay elaborates a blanched proportion of pros and cons.
There is no doubt that youth revolution has a great importance because it helps countries to develop it. However, elderly have high value because they put roots of development in their commmunities in general.
To begin with, countries which have youth generation often become stronger than others. Youngsters have sufficient enthusiasm, energy and desire which contribute to build their countries to become one of the first developed countries. This means any country should depends on various fields such as Economy, industry and tourism, but these often happen through youth energy. For instance, most smart applications such as Facebook, Twitter and Snapchat created by American youth, when they still study at universities. In addition, these inventions exploded their energy in a good way that reflect to their country huge investments annually.As a consequence of that, youth influences positively on their countries.
On the other hand, there are some countries depend on old people through their experiences which impact significantly on their countries development. In other words, in practical life, most CEOs ages are more than 45 years old in most companies. To illustrate, in my country, most politicts and scientists are old which work in important sites in the country. This occures because they have a strong experiments, knowledge to impart their experiences in suitable places. From that, elderly should treate with them as explorers or experts because they play a vital role to improve countries by easy ways.
To sum up, I strongly believe that countries that have youngsters more than old people are strong because it can build their countries by new vision and transfer it to high level of development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, thus, for instance, in addition, in general, no doubt, such as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37867647059 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81053372251 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1069631032 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125630203465 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481364447595 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338852147416 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793446310932 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317401782649 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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