Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.
Do you agree or disagree?
At present, more people are watching Television than few decades ago. Because of this trend some people are becoming lazy and spend less time for socializing. In my view, I agree to this thought, Addiction for TV series, watching movies and see favourite songs are the important reasons for this change.
Firstly, many women who stay at home spend enormous time in watching TV serials. For instance, recent survey says that, on a average a woman spends 2 - 3 hours in watching various TV series, which is 10 percent of their day. Many parents are not spending adequate time in educating school subjects. Additionally, some channels telecast live songs based on viewer's choice and women are more interested to watch their favourite songs.
Secondly, both men and women spent less time doing daily exercise routines. They are becoming very lazy to involve in any fitness routines instead they spend watching TV serials and songs. For example, a recent study by dietician says that, people who watch more time in Television could cause obesity, also this trend enables them to be lazy in their life.
Finally, 20 years ago, people spent considerable time in socializing with their friends, neighbours and relatives, however, this trend has changed at the moment due to high time spend in watching TV shows. Hence, less time is spending in interacting with closed ones. If this trend continues even your neighbours will become strangers and the bonding between family members would be lost.
In conclusion, the current trend of watching more Television shows would enable to become lazy and be less socializing with our near ones. Therefore, more time need to be spend in improving personal skills, engross our knowledge in other beneficial areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'viewers'' or 'viewer's'?
Suggestion: viewers'; viewer's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12195121951 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5079733961 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8095465938 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141297747939 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578573384832 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395282399647 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890726662377 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257032093539 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.