The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
The importance of animals which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people cliaming that it is beneficial while rejeect this notion.The substantial influence of reason has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent years. In my opinion the former latter appears to be more rational. this essay will further elaborate the positive effect of this trend and thus will lead to be logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain the most preponderant one stems from the fact that animals right is most disscused and one of the highly debatable topics in most of the tv programs and few magazines. As a result I think zoo hurt animals because they want spent of our life in a open environment
Another aspect of this argument is that animals feel bad in their zoo. Needdless to say all these merits stand a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, this trend has some more merits but some people negate this argument is that zoo also help them animals but some time they hurt them. For instance: some people says it should be banned .Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of zoo.
In conclusion, according to this argument aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion of the drawbacks of animals zoo are instrumental indeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9375 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63970311314 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602678571429 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6399913488 50.4703680194 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.888888889 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 7.25397266985 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241690336658 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950824906777 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744472522514 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132489974262 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450452905075 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.