The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
In this modern era,we are living in the modern society nowadays animals are very important for environment and zoos are very essential place for animals.I will disscus about my point of view in my upcoming paragraph.
The first and foremost reason, some people ask zoos should be banned and some people ask zoos should not be banned but zoos are very important for animals health because that is very safe place. In vacations people and children are going to zoos and enjoy with animals and they feel better. people are not hunting animals in the zoos. they are good for their animals brain.
On the other hand we can say that some animals are sick many types of problems and infections and they need care and different types of medicines for our health. people who work at zoos and they work their places.they provides medicine and good food.animals are happy in zoos because servents are provide everything to animals and zoos are not be banned because they are very good idea for animals safety.
At the end of this eassy zoos are main part of animal safety and they feel fresh air and many types of facilities and zoos should not be banned for animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66829268293 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17280799579 2.71678728327 80% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 139.433497537 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482926829268 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3739205446 50.4703680194 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.625 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302310495913 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154839808228 0.0925447433944 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754051591063 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205873271923 0.151781067708 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079000794427 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 55.0591133005 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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