In the contemporary world, opinions are divided whether it is the passion of individuals to do any sports or activity or high-risk sports should be banned by the governments.
On the one hand, those who advocate that the governments should take steps to discourage extreme sports have their reason. Firstly, doing risky sports like skydiving, rock climbing have risk of internal injury and even death. In fact, the media has revealed many instance of significant accident cause by extreme activity, which is responsible for disfavor of extreme sports. It is not mention is that those who had an accident due to do risky sports require other people like mother, father, friends to take care, which take a myriad of time and money.
On the other hand, I strongly support the view of those who believe doing any sport or activity will do more good than harm.
The first thing I can mention is that we would gain a new experience what we may never forget in our life. This mean that, doing risky sport not only improve your physique like some normally sport, but also bring a variety of emotion like fearing, exciting and interest.As a result, they would got more passion and improve their talent, which largely contribute to the success of a person. The second thing is organizing high-risk event attract a lot of tourists to visit. This by mean there are jobs created as a solution for local unemployment force.
In conclusion, although the idea of banning risky sports is worthwhile in the view of some people, I firmly believe that the kind of sport should be encourage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun instance seems to be countable; consider using: 'many instances'.
Suggestion: many instances
... death. In fact, the media has revealed many instance of significant accident cause by extrem...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d money. On the other hand, I strongly support the idea of doing any sport or a...
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Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...elieve that the kind of sport should be encourage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79838709677 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50357444779 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7522518445 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.181818182 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291219394705 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10113389605 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870301144087 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190709729858 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496785848335 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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