Nearly every new building is designed by an architect nowadays. Some people believe that is important for a building. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In these days, there are more and more new building need to be designed by experts. Some people think that it is an unnecessary matter, while some people consider that it is important. I, personally, agree with the point that building should be constructed and designed by experts, as there are several problems in the world causing corresponding needs to buildings.
The first and the most obvious reason is that the demand for security is on the increase, as the increasing crime rates and the number of natural disasters is dramatically on the rise. For instance, some people decide to commit burglary in order to make a living. Therefore, it is crucial to strengthen the protection of building. Also, the extreme climate always brings serious disasters to human beings. Another example is that earthquake causes lots of death at one time because of the collapse of buildings and many people are buried under destruction. Hence, people need a stronger building to protect themselves from danger.
Another reason is that the increase of population causes less living space in most of cities around the world. Therefore, it is vital to use space in an effective method. Architects can use their professional to tackle this problem. Also, the crowed environment usually results in anxious lifestyle, and architects can create more suitable and relaxing living space to people, which helps modern people escape from the anxious place and brings a more healthy life to them.
In conclusion, designing new building by architects can indeed improve the problems that people are faced. Therefore, it is necessary to ask architects to design the new buildings.
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns as it increase the crime and violence in the society To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
- Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- In many countries in the world, some people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this good for a country. Others think that the government should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cities') or simply say ''most cities''.
Suggestion: most of the cities; most cities
... population causes less living space in most of cities around the world. Therefore, it is vita...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17037037037 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72179638897 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6546821807 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243505720339 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805696703329 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603390148582 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156069786913 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693133057235 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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