In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems.
Marriage is the oldest phenomenon in this world. In this modern and fast paced life people usually avoid getting married at early age and seek to find the right partner of their choice. However, few faction of parents with a conservative approach, marriages are being finalized by their parents. In this essay will discuss both the views.
In this modern era, people usually tend to take decision based on their own instincts and calculations, they are hardly influenced by parents especially in the matter of marriage, education and career. Today's millennial's are aware of the consequence when marriage doesn't hold good, ultimately leading to unhappy life or divorce at the end. Partners chosen by themselves will most of the time last long as they bond well and they know each other traits and limits. As per the survey cobducted by Times of India, it disclosed that the love marriages usually last longer than arranged marriage, adding to that it also avoids cases like divorce, harassment., too the maximum extent.
On the contrary, earlier traditional method of marriage was decided by spouse parents. It is widely believed that parents always take right and perfect decision in all fields of their children and marriage stands no exception. They consider the long term perspective based on tradition, culture and financial conditions. However in this modern world this is not working and there are many instance where marriages are broken for small misunderstanding between partners, as they are not able to understand each other and the spouse were not of their choice.
All in all, marriage needs to be as per the will and wish of the bride and groom, although the parents interference is required but ultimate decision has to be of respective individuals who are getting married. This way partners can lead a healthy and happy life in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: few factions
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, as to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04207119741 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62733746368 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57928802589 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9035704861 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270213912868 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884254417038 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394725066004 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161434107075 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049361162245 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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