With the advent of internet, there is another type of criminal activities. Lack of physical involvement of persons exacerbate the situation. Eventhough internet posses many benefits, numerous deterimental issues stem from it and immediate methods are to be identified to solve this.
First and foremost crime that occur in online platform is identity theft. Not only individuals but also companies are suffering due to this. This practise is used by criminals for doing illegal activities and they will be safe, since their identity is disguised. Companies lose their customers because of fake advertisments and offers.
Moreover, hacking is another pressing problem of this decade. Hardly any website in this world is safe. Offenders use personal informations such as bank details for stealing money. Stealing personal information can affect a person's professional and personal life. For example, last year all countries across the world witnessed a cyber attack called vanacry. It was caused by a rusam attack and for retreving the affected websites, they demanded a huge amount of money.
Inorder to curb the issue, every one should remain alert and try not to use suspecious links and websites. Anti virous with superior quality must be installed. As major attacks are focussing on windows, people should switch to other operating systems luke linux which is comparitively safe. Companies should make their websites more secured by several step by step procedures. Till now this problem is escalating and therefore government should adopt strict laws and regulations.
In conclusion, as cyber crime is a burning issue of present days joint efforts from every one is required to tackle it. Otherwise, there wll be more victims and loss.
- More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged To what extend do you agree 64
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Nowadays many business meetings and training are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this matter? 11
- In many countries crime is on increasing. Wht are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situations? Support your opinion with relevant examples. 73
- Marketing and promotion is the key to a successful business. To what extent do you agree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... their identity is disguised. Companies loose their customers because of fake adverti...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... customers because of fake advertisments and offers. Moreover, hacking is anot...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Hardly' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...nother pressing problem of this decade. Hardly any website in this world is safe. Offe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3185483871 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69183050782 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685483870968 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9723154361 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.2777777778 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0721112752876 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0200703011756 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024491853246 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0333070708535 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303906908688 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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