The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e city in the period of 2007 and 2010. It is clear that city hospitals railway ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hospitals'' or 'hospital's'?
Suggestion: hospitals'; hospital's
...2007 and 2010. It is clear that city hospitals railway has significant developments. T...
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...n style='font-size: 19.36px;'> big amount of vehicles. Specifically...
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...36px;'> big amount of vehicles. Specifically, in 2010, public car park <...> ^^
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Suggestion: That
...cars on the right of the hospital road. that means the busstops were ^^^^
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...yle='font-size: 19.36px;'>. In ^^^^^
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...n style='font-size: 19.36px;'>,two ^^^^
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...ppeared which allow traffic run smothly.It also made ^^
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Suggestion: Beside
...e: 19.36px;'> of the city hospital.Beside the disappearance of bus stops <...> ^^^^^^
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...9.36px;'> two side of hospital road , the city road still existed .
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Suggestion: .
...pital road , the city road still existed .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.88679245283 4.92477711251 180% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.73116410623 2.65546596893 291% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.45097560976 145% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 227.942169537 43.030603864 530% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.857142857 112.824112599 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0740535817474 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105251373133 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933905126976 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113627818973 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980204291665 0.0819641961636 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.8 13.2329268293 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.84 61.2550243902 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 10.3012195122 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 34.58 11.4140731707 303% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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