The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">The pictures demonstrated the changes to road access to hospital of the city in the period of 2007 and 2010.
It is clear that city hospital's railway has significant developments. The new construction </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">reposed</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> big amount of vehicles.
Specifically, in 2010, public car park </span>was constructed<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> in the east area of the city hospital while the ring road still remained. Staffs of hospital had their own place for their cars on the right of the hospital road. that means the busstops were </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">demolished</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">.
In </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">added</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">,two </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">roundabouts</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> appeared which allow traffic run smothly.It also made </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">paths to</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> the bus station which </span>was built<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> in the </span>south west<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> of the city hospital.Beside the disappearance of bus stops </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">in</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> two side of hospital road , the city road still existed .</span>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e city in the period of 2007 and 2010. It is clear that city hospitals railway ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hospitals'' or 'hospital's'?
Suggestion: hospitals'; hospital's
...2007 and 2010. It is clear that city hospitals railway has significant developments. T...
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...n style='font-size: 19.36px;'> big amount of vehicles. Specifically...
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...36px;'> big amount of vehicles. Specifically, in 2010, public car park <...> ^^
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...cars on the right of the hospital road. that means the busstops were ^^^^
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...yle='font-size: 19.36px;'>. In ^^^^^
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...n style='font-size: 19.36px;'>,two ^^^^
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...ppeared which allow traffic run smothly.It also made ^^
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...e: 19.36px;'> of the city hospital.Beside the disappearance of bus stops <...> ^^^^^^
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...9.36px;'> two side of hospital road , the city road still existed .
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...pital road , the city road still existed .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.88679245283 4.92477711251 180% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.73116410623 2.65546596893 291% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.45097560976 145% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 227.942169537 43.030603864 530% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.857142857 112.824112599 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0740535817474 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105251373133 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933905126976 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113627818973 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980204291665 0.0819641961636 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.8 13.2329268293 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.84 61.2550243902 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 10.3012195122 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 34.58 11.4140731707 303% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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