Do you think a museum is to educate or entertain people?
There is a school of thought that museum is one of the main tourist attraction throughout the world. Nevertheless, its impact on every aspect of life brings much controversial debate with regard to their basic function. Some people hold the view that museums are supposed to be a source of entertainment, while others believe educational value is the vital aspect of museum. This essay will elaborate both sides of this argument from a cultural perspective.
On the one hand, there are several reason why many people around the world argued that museums are educational for the citizens of a nation. The first reason to support it is that museum can increase the historical awareness among human by representing the custom, culture, art and a tradition of our ancestor. Moreover, it can show the progress in developing various living equipment and creatures such as ancient animals, motor vehicles, fire arm and other stimulating components of many revolutions which demonstrate the pace of life. For this reason, children have a chance to familiar with ancient species such as Dinosaur by studying and investigating their remains at museum. To illustrate, we can see from an article having been published by The New York Time Magazine indicating that British pupil’s score in academic subject such as History boots up 40% by visiting museums as part of their school curriculum.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that modern museums have the possibility to make a great day out for your families, soul mates as well as you and the lover. It stands to the reason that more and more museums have been built with the style of creative architecture. Furthermore, it amuses young people through the history by exhibiting the costumes, earrings, unique toys and a large number of other things which involve in the style of younger generation. One particularly salient example is that The Creative Discovery Museum in which the visitors can try to relax with many colors, special designs and building of a parkland in this place.
In a nutshell, while the idea of educating historical knowledge from traditional museums was greatly interest, i still believe that modern museums could also be value when we make a decision to hangout with friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: FIRE_ARM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'firearm'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: firearm
...uch as ancient animals, motor vehicles, fire arm and other stimulating components of man...
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Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...the costumes, earrings, unique toys and a large number of other things which involve in the style...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, no doubt, such as, as well as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06989247312 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77346931448 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575268817204 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6701407842 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.714285714 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194534718599 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677488728867 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619845484786 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12216745856 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127026812675 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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