Universitiesshould accept equal number of female and male students in every subject
Many people belive that the number of female and male student should be equal, others claim that it should not be.
This essay will take a closer look at the matter, showing my opinion and giving fair reason to support it.
I personally agree with equality, despite the gender studying any subject.
First of all I strongly belive that some occupations are gender related.There are some tasks that women do better than men do.However , there always will be a work or subject for study more suitable for men than women.For example, if male and female are studying electrical engineering men could be better at it.Despite that if the female student work hard,shows some talent and it is interested in, hence there is no problem of female students to study electrical engineering.
Thinking of equality to men and women it is significant to note that ,there are particularly positions for certain gende.Though subject line medicine is studied by both male and female student.However we can deny that the job or field of studies which require more physical strength are best for men.The equality is bright idea in some part of the world, in order to promote women empowerment.Having said that o certainly do not think ,this practice of any benefit globally as a standard.
In conclusion, though both the opinion are valid enough, I shall not agree to the point that the admission should be strictly based on the same number if men or women,rather than grades or interest when it comes to.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95634920635 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7778716866 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.621875222 49.4020404114 351% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.166666667 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208003509163 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103880713943 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833826401364 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103880713943 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833826401364 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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