You are planning to give a presentation in your large company. Write a letter to your colleague asking for help.
- When and where
- What the presentation is about
- What you would like your colleague to do
Dear Friend,
I would like to let you know that I am organizing a presentation concerning “existing updates and trends in technology”. As I know, you possess great knowledge and have the experience of delivering presentations in your company, I would certainly require your support to prepare it.
Undoubtedly, my company is going to invest huge bucks for the upcoming technology and based on last victorious performance and quarter results they want to avenue more through new technologies in the market. Based on this, I have prepared some detailed report which I would like to present at the conference.
The conference will take place in KNMA museum conference hall on Thursday 10th April 2019 , 11 am – 2 pm. It would be very kind of you, if you could arrange sometime and provide me tips and techniques to deliver in pleasantly. I have arranged place at my house to practice this.
I will be delighted if you could come over this weekend and we will spend some valuable time together.
Yours faithfully
Vivek
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ference hall on Thursday 10th April 2019 , 11 am – 2 pm. It would be very kind of ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04046242775 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03165141334 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705202312139 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2260045912 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8888888889 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219830171465 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912067882137 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848018803075 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111291992494 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958364884076 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.