In many countries around the world, live expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion
The rates of longevity increased time-to-time in majority countries in these days. Although live expectancy leads people to have much more time to spend with their close relatives, but it triggers lack of job opportunity for young generation at the same time. To embark on, live expectancy make people more joyful. this is because they have extra time to gather with their family. Furthermore, it may lead to a person to strengthen their relationship between expanded family members. Commonly, most of teenagers nowadays could not see their grand father ad grand mother inasmuch as their ancestors already passed away since they are children. this resulted in young people never knowing their elders family. this is ample evidence that living longer makes people tightening relationship among their relatives. What is more, longevity might lead persons become unemployed. this happened because there is a tough competition between adult and youngsters in order to obtain the same job which triggers lack of workplace for young generation. majority manufacturing companies in Japan tend to employ older people rather than young people because they have a tendency that the more people are getting older, the more productive they are. Therefore, it is causing the rates of unemployment people increased. To sum up, even though live expectancy can increase such happiness and productivity of someone, at the same time it makes job fields limit for young generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, may, so, then, therefore, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33766233766 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71253490624 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3208310828 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8461538462 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796815129597 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351786138006 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327767135985 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796815129597 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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