Some people regard videos game as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however believe that videos game are having an adverse effected on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawback of video games outweigh the benefits?
Nowadays, videos game are a common choice for leisure time, children in particular really enjoy playing videos game. While I accept that these games have some benefits for children development, I believe that they are more likely to have negative effects on children.
On the one hand, videos game can be both educational and entertaining. They improve kids problem-solving and develop creativity. In videos game, children always have to struggle with challenge missions to get higher levels, which seem to help children learn how to make decisions, use strategies and express their personalities. Furthermore. Videos game bring to children an opportunity to make friends. Schoolchildren may have a tendency to play games with a group friend, either in the same room or online. In that way, they might be easier to make conversation or get a chance to meet people who have different backgrounds, as a result, they would expand their relationship circle.
On the other hand, videos game can be addictive and promoted such isolation, health problems. Children seem to spend too much time playing games rather than physical playing outside, which is a factor of missing out on their social life. They tend to immerse in the virtual world, so take no notice to real-life pastimes. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school. To complete challenging tasks and get a higher score of their friends, they might scarify for hours on the computer and console and totally ignore their homework. Videos game take responsibility for obesity. The major number of children who get obesity are gamers who are likely to stick on a desk, have a sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise.
In conclusion, I consider that the potential danger of videos game are more significant than the possible merit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, really, so, while, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7945551571 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0138028776 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332478000054 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121227259233 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869117477115 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221353845771 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600322857364 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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