More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
In recent time, people have an intention to migrate to a large metropolis where are seen as a place of opportunities but there are some drawbacks of living in a big city. I believe that governments could do much more to improve city life for inhabitants.
There are several problems that people think of when considering moving to cities. The main problem is that the cost of living in cities are like higher than in the surrounding suburbs such as food, drinks, and gasoline. In some cases, people could pay for renting accommodation because of lacking space, but it is more expensive than the countryside. Furthermore, causing public transport systems and the streets always overcrowded, and vehicles releasing a great amount of CO2 emissions. In that way, the air quality in cities is often poor. In addition, urban areas seem to suffer from a social problem. As a typical example of this is that high crime and poverty rates in comparison with rural areas. As a result, cities can be unhealthy and stressful.
There are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. First, they should invest money in social and affordable buildings to supply accommodation for poor people, which allows reducing the living cost. Second, if they raised a fund to improve deprived areas in some of which are infrastructure, education, and hospitals, the living qualities of people who live under the margin of poverty would be enhanced, which lead to curb the rate of crime in cities. Finally, to decline CO2 emissions by constraining private cars in rush time and promote citizens to use more public transport systems and share-cars.
In conclusion, Living in the cities have many difficulties but the government could implement a range of measures to improve the urban life for every resident.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79702023987 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7237665153 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289553328278 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862003474086 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821352152177 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188678209442 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671896840096 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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