Different studies have shown that the trend of watching television by children has tremendously increased
as compared to the past and now they give less time to doing creative things. This essay will explain that
the primary reason for this is due to greater availability of TV channels, and the best solution to tackle
this problem is to educate parents on how to control their children.
The main reason for children watching more television nowadays is an increased number of cartoon channels being broadcasted on television. In the past, there used to be a limited number of TV channels that would
broadcast cartoons for children, but now many new companies have stepped in the television industry. As a result,
children waste more of their time in watching these programmes as they feel amused by the fascinating stories presented in such programmes. For instance, in my childhood, I used to watch cartoons only for 20 minutes every day because there was only one channel presenting cartoons for children.
A long term solution to this predicament is to launch a public campaign for educating parents about parenting skills.
Parents should be taught about the dangers of losing control of their children. One way to have more control over children
is to motivate them by offering rewards on the completion of specific tasks requiring their active participation.
Children are likely to take an interest in such activities if they know that they will get the things they like. A recent study by the Khaleej Times has shown that parents who learned about parenting skills were successful in motivating their children to complete their homework timely.
In conclusion, the main cause of young people giving more time to TV is a wide range of cartoon programmes, and this issue can be overcome by teaching parents about good parenting skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12459016393 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70619939844 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.7151103828 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249289419185 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103842623879 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687794329727 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948482365892 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055913719622 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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