The environment we live in is in danger due to various global problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures?
Environment affects human health in a great deal, and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. There are many crucial factors, which make an environment dangerous for human beings. Greenhouse gases produce by factories and automobile have caused various health issues around the globe. To stop it, governments and people should world together to combat this issue. I will discuss the controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
To being with, people are having trouble to breath in the current environment, because air around us contains lots of menace gases. These gases are produced by chemical dispose from factories and CO2 generated by cars and busses. For instance, in China thousands of people are dying every year due to pollution in the air. China is a very developed country, but due to its rapid development the government are facing various challenges to curtail the effects of pollution.
On the other hand, people and governments have to take serious action to filter the environment from harmful gases. Factories should be implemented far away from the cities, and restrict the use of dangerous chemical. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has conducted that those countries, which use electric automobile rather than fuel machines have less death rates from pollution. Therefore, it is clear that by implementing eco-friendly systems, and planting more trees can make environment safe for humans.
While, there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that by introducing innovative solutions to the countries can reduce the effects of pollution. People must be united together to educate students, and do surveys to warn citizens about the effects of environment around them.
- The environment we live in is in danger due to various global problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures? 77
- In the competition for consumerism, natural resources are fast depleting and run the risk of disappearing from the face of the Earth. What steps do you think governments and people should take to protect and preserve the natural resources? 85
- A recent trend in the entertainment world is to adapt classic works of literature for either TV or the movies. One argument is that this is to everyone’s benefit, as it introduces people to works they might otherwise never have experienced, while others 77
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What’s your opinion? Good or bad? 77
- With the advent of Internet age increasing number of workers are doing their jobs from home and communicating with their office through Internet Known as telecommuting this trend is expected to catch up with most office workers in the coming decades How i 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'begin'?
Suggestion: begin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86431243308 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7946856066 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104338381432 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353889319677 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266434285874 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597690656693 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425656174327 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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