Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, one of the burning issues in the contemporary society relates to whether vegetarianism should be followed by everyone in order not to have various problems connected with humans' health from eating meat. This essay will, firstly, discuss the idea that a vegetarian lifestyle has a positive impact on people's' organisms and, secondly, it will give some thoughts supporting the meat eaters.
The argument in favor of being a vegetarian is relatively clear. This way of life helps to avoid such serious and unpleasant problems as cancer and heart diseases which in many cases are caused by regular consuming of red meat. So, eating fruits and vegetables provides bodies with necessary vitamins and prolongs our lives. Moreover, it gives a feeling of lightness and harmony with body and mind. The illustration can be instructors of yoga that usually are vegans and at the same time are looking fresh, happy and healthy.
However, there is another side of this issue: being fulfilled with lots of healthy microorganisms meat helps to improve immunity. As a result, person's resistance to illnesses and rapid changes of weather temperature is better with meat consumption. According to statistics, people who are non-vegetarians in 7 cases if 10 have better immune system comparing with those who do not eat meat. What is more, meat is one of the best examples of protein products that are essential for stable functioning of different organs, hence very many sportsmen try to eat meat almost every day.
Taking everything into consideration, vegetarianism has various benefits but, in my opinion, meat consumption is much more significant and helpful for every one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, as a result, in many cases, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24535315985 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88771262517 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669144981413 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4755706977 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.583333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198572028918 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627091531462 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435255093521 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10912003862 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365090973999 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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